Judgment got to practice in front of a mirror! (But Sun still hasn't had the chance... or at least he hasn't had a chance to tell us about it, haha).
"spending much too long trying to comb Sun's hair," XDDD Noooo, tangles! And then Judgment chops it off. XDDD But nah, Sun would never forgive him if he did that...
I wasn't planning on having Storm appear until later, but this order of events makes a little more sense. *it was why this part grew a lot once again, since I had Judgment find the Sun Knight Platoon right away at first, but then I had to insert Storm's scene...*
Eeeeee, Elijah! :D :D!! (Maybe add that Roland was a captain?) Oh right, maybe Storm should have mentioned the captain part. XD;;
"but there was still a strange pain around the area of my stomach." Hmmmmmmmm. Oh really...? >D /being super obvious
I'd go with option b. :P Or c: a bit of both. I think it must be a bit of both. XD; I would think they'd all have been nice, upstanding citizens... but after being led by Grisia... they'd... restrain themselves less? XD;
*dies laughing* *Dies laughing* *dies laughing at the entire paragraph* omgggggggolllllll! XDDD
Hehe, the dressing up one of the knights part was the 4th bullet point on my list. *nods* Let's see if I can wrap this story up in a believable way... I seemed to have created a mess that is just as messy or even messier than the original. XDD;;
Sun really does look very feminine in the drawing. XD;;; And there's a duckie! Haha, Judgment brought his sword with him...
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Date: 2011-10-05 11:52 pm (UTC)"spending much too long trying to comb Sun's hair,"
XDDD Noooo, tangles!
And then Judgment chops it off. XDDD But nah, Sun would never forgive him if he did that...
I wasn't planning on having Storm appear until later, but this order of events makes a little more sense. *it was why this part grew a lot once again, since I had Judgment find the Sun Knight Platoon right away at first, but then I had to insert Storm's scene...*
Eeeeee, Elijah! :D :D!! (Maybe add that Roland was a captain?)
Oh right, maybe Storm should have mentioned the captain part. XD;;
"but there was still a strange pain around the area of my stomach."
Hmmmmmmmm. Oh really...? >D
/being super obvious
I'd go with option b. :P Or c: a bit of both.
I think it must be a bit of both. XD; I would think they'd all have been nice, upstanding citizens... but after being led by Grisia... they'd... restrain themselves less? XD;
*dies laughing* *Dies laughing* *dies laughing at the entire paragraph* omgggggggolllllll!
XDDD
Hehe, the dressing up one of the knights part was the 4th bullet point on my list. *nods* Let's see if I can wrap this story up in a believable way... I seemed to have created a mess that is just as messy or even messier than the original. XDD;;
Sun really does look very feminine in the drawing. XD;;; And there's a duckie! Haha, Judgment brought his sword with him...