Veline part 16

Haha... I've barely touched my NaNo story since November ended. Now it's already February. At this rate, I won't be able to finish by June (I plan to take up CreateSpace's offer of printing a free proof copy. June's the deadline), especially since the end of the story is no where in sight. I wonder if I can at least wrap up this next section. 2011 already doesn't seem like a very writing filled year for me. XD

I wrote... maybe around 400 words of this story since November? XD; Most of this section was part of my 50k word count I wrote back in November. This section is all over the place (I have no idea how much time passes), but it's... cute, I guess. XD; Still haven't figured out how to get to the next section...

I seriously need to rename this story since they're not even in Veline, ahhhhh. I reread some of the previous parts... I like my writing in the beginning better. XD; (It's like, coming apart instead of getting better. Goes to show how long fiction isn't my specialty, ahhhh).

( Veline part 16 )