lucathia

I wanted to write this in one day. I managed to write the first scene with Storm on the first day, and the rest just wouldn't get written at all. XD; (And then my bad habit struck with me rereading the beginning parts each time I opened the document again. >__> Hence, the beginning got a lot of editing while the ending part did not...) I hope you manage to write lots for the rest of the week. :D

Strawberry, Elmairy, Leaf... they all go together, right? XD; poor Leaf I don't actually remember Sun's nicknames for other people off the top of my head (which is why Leaf didn't mention them, hahaha) but they were pretty out there.

This whole beginning section was a lot more introspective than I thought it'd be! Leaf wanted to be thoughtful. :3

OMG. OMG. *is laughing so hard* I so can't wait to see this in the third volume! (But noooo~ So long to wait!)
The voodoo dolls are mentioned a little in the third volume... maybe in the second volume too? I don't remember. They were actually more prominent in one of the side stories! I've seen some fanart with Leaf and his voodoo dolls. Seems like it's what he's most associated later on. XD;

*dies* Oh so cute! Everything would collapse if Storm couldn't do his paperwork!
Leaf seems like he'd worry about stuff like this. XD Man, if Storm couldn't do his paperwork, the entire Holy Temple wouldn't be able to function! And then it'd all be Earth's fault for causing that. XD

"His last shake turned into one resolute nod before he shoved a stack of paperwork at me."
Ahaha! The opposite of my fic! XDD
Oh hey, you're right! I kind of wanted to describe what his shake-turned-into-nod looked like (kind of like a triangular motion?) but I didn't know how to describe it. XD

"Surely I was thinking too much?"
*laughs* Hmmmm~
Poor Leaf! XD I think he's actually not that oblivious about when people are asking him for help or making use of his kindness, but I didn't delve too deeply into that. XD;

"It just meant I had to try harder, right?"
*untranslatable noise* WHY SO CUTE??
:DD

I have no idea if Ice Knights are like that, but it is so fun imagining them like that. XD;

Heeee! Must be pretty awesome, until they have to talk with someone else. XDD
LOL! There'd be communication problems for sure. XD Like, people going... "I thought we're supposed to go to the market!" "No, I meant the captain is at the market." "But you only said 'market'. How was I supposed to know all that from a single word!?"

"No one talked about where their desserts came from, but everyone knew Ice was the source,"
♥~ *is so ridiculously happy*
:DDD

Did he drag a dresser in front of the door or something?
Oh gosh, I should have had him do that. They were supposed to be a little worried, wondering who was outside because Ice was wearing a pink apron and oven mitts with hearts, so if it was someone else who wasn't supposed to see this, Sun was going to warn Ice. XD; But yeah, none of that made it in.

"“Let me help you clean that up,” I said."
Ack! Nooooo, Leaf~
Poor Leaf. :'D

There's sweets at stake here!
There are! XD Ice has an advantage there.

XDDD Oh, poor Leaf! He's the messenger guy for everyone!
Seriously, poor Leaf.... XD;

"I sniffed the bread and kept an eye on Ice’s response as I did so."
There's just something about this that I love. (Maybe because I'm seeing a bit of Marland in him or something. X3;;;)
Eeee! Maybe it's because Leaf is an archer, but I seem to feel he should have somewhat better senses than some of the others. But it might be his eyesight or his hearing instead of his smell. XD; Still, with how much he likes seasoning, I'm sure he has a fairly good nose. :3 And Ice... gotta gauge him through his behavior and actions since he's pretty expressionless and doesn't talk much. XD;