I wish I could have been faster! Or at least wrote this on another day and not on the last day because oh gosh, NO TIME. Though I guess it was the no time part that really pushed me. XD;; I sort of wanted to stop writing this part in the middle and divide it up... but that wouldn't have worked with the narration. :'(
'You're rude and annoying. But that's the one I want to play.' LOL, yes, exactly. Very well put. XDD
Ah, second person... omniscient. There's such a thing? XD; I don't know my literary terms at all. When I was reading your fanfic meme, I was going, ooo, I want to try out 3rd person omniscient! And now it's sneaking in everywhere. ^^;; I think I kind of default to an omniscient narrator when I get pressured for time. But yeah, this "you" is kind of a general "you" and not an actual character. I usually don't like second person narrative either, though there are some very nicely done ones. :3
I hope I didn't lose you with all the characters. XD; It started out very smoothly for me, and then they got harder and harder to write. XD; I seem to know the later characters less, or maybe I somehow don't see their impact on Ryoma and Ryoma's impact on them as much. XDD
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Date: 2011-04-01 08:27 am (UTC)I wish I could have been faster! Or at least wrote this on another day and not on the last day because oh gosh, NO TIME. Though I guess it was the no time part that really pushed me. XD;; I sort of wanted to stop writing this part in the middle and divide it up... but that wouldn't have worked with the narration. :'(
'You're rude and annoying. But that's the one I want to play.'
LOL, yes, exactly. Very well put. XDD
Ah, second person... omniscient. There's such a thing? XD; I don't know my literary terms at all. When I was reading your fanfic meme, I was going, ooo, I want to try out 3rd person omniscient! And now it's sneaking in everywhere. ^^;; I think I kind of default to an omniscient narrator when I get pressured for time. But yeah, this "you" is kind of a general "you" and not an actual character. I usually don't like second person narrative either, though there are some very nicely done ones. :3
I hope I didn't lose you with all the characters. XD; It started out very smoothly for me, and then they got harder and harder to write. XD; I seem to know the later characters less, or maybe I somehow don't see their impact on Ryoma and Ryoma's impact on them as much. XDD
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