Aw, drawing hearts makes this sound like it's in tangible, print form. :D I actually scribbled notes for this on paper (I never do this! my planning is mostly on the computer) and was drawing flowers in the margins, haha. Though flowers don't seem to suit the current mood of this fic.
Ryoma was interesting to write here since he was amnesic in the series for a few chapters. And wow, he was sure different during those chapters. I tried expanding on that, but I think I'm portraying him as more insecure than he'd actually be even without his memories (I blame that on the super scary tennis match though).
The bath scene was one of the first scenes I wanted to write~. (I'm glad I managed to tie it in with the next part)
The next scene is very... disjointed, I guess? It seemed to work, but yeah, poor Ryoma. ):
I don't know why, but words for this fic came very easily. Maybe it's the style? XD; Or maybe it's because this most recent plunny is so rabid while my previous plunnies have calmed down. I'll have to poke them into action later. XD;
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Date: 2011-03-14 05:43 am (UTC)Ryoma was interesting to write here since he was amnesic in the series for a few chapters. And wow, he was sure different during those chapters. I tried expanding on that, but I think I'm portraying him as more insecure than he'd actually be even without his memories (I blame that on the super scary tennis match though).
The bath scene was one of the first scenes I wanted to write~. (I'm glad I managed to tie it in with the next part)
The next scene is very... disjointed, I guess? It seemed to work, but yeah, poor Ryoma. ):
I don't know why, but words for this fic came very easily. Maybe it's the style? XD; Or maybe it's because this most recent plunny is so rabid while my previous plunnies have calmed down. I'll have to poke them into action later. XD;