This piece was interesting to write with all the pronouns. I usually use a lot of pronouns...but never this many. Usually all the "he's" or "she's" when I write about more than one character of the same gender get confusing, but here it's just it and they with a smattering of he's and she's. Detachment is a good way to describe it! Kind of like a...us against it thing.
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Date: 2010-08-28 07:17 am (UTC)This piece was interesting to write with all the pronouns. I usually use a lot of pronouns...but never this many. Usually all the "he's" or "she's" when I write about more than one character of the same gender get confusing, but here it's just it and they with a smattering of he's and she's. Detachment is a good way to describe it! Kind of like a...us against it thing.