There's no such thing as too many pronouns! ...Not, that's a lie, but I loved it. There's a lot of contemporary fiction nowadays that does a pronoun overload, and especially with Zearth it's like...it doesn't see the names of the children, just the children. It was almost detached but intimate? I'm not making any sense. I admit, I'm going on a pronoun kick with my writing lately, so that may be why it appealed to me so much, but it just worked.
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Date: 2010-08-28 07:02 am (UTC)watch me tag back too fastThere's no such thing as too many pronouns! ...Not, that's a lie, but I loved it. There's a lot of contemporary fiction nowadays that does a pronoun overload, and especially with Zearth it's like...it doesn't see the names of the children, just the children. It was almost detached but intimate? I'm not making any sense. I admit, I'm going on a pronoun kick with my writing lately, so that may be why it appealed to me so much, but it just worked.