geniusgirl ([identity profile] geniusgirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lucathia 2007-02-10 05:27 am (UTC)

I have no idea how I missed this but yes! Yes, yes and more yes because the "lovey-dovey eyes" is ♥

Ok, so that wasn't quite eloquent but I did enjoy it. I like the way Masahiro is coming around, slowly but surely. Kaichou kinda spoiled the moment though. Hmph, thinking about Arou at a time like that. Honestly!

But it was really well-written, as usual, and I'm glad the siblings are making things better between themselves especially with the teasing XD.

I'll be honest and say that you're right that there was something a bit more...raw? choppy? about this chapter than the others but it's nothing to be disappointed by. It's barely noticable (I just noticed cuz I'm seriously fangirling this story and you mentioned it) so no worries :)

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