Someone wrote in [personal profile] lucathia 2012-06-29 06:43 pm (UTC)

nice!!!

=3 this is so interesting!! i really like the way you write XD and i'm really looking forward for chapter 3, i wonder what it'll be about!
and...it's kind of weird, but i figured out what prince was saying without knowing it was pig latin (though i had a hard time) and when i read it down i immediately re-read all the chap to see if i had it right =D, and don't worry the chap isn't boring at all, i quite enjoyed it.

by the way for names for the team, how about:
-->drifters (since they travel and prince is actually from another world)
-->boundless
-->mighty warriors
-->fearless squad(since with their caliber there's little to be scared about)
-->unlimited/no rules team (cause they - neo - don't care about rules)
-->slayers
-->the untouchables
-->myth team/squad (because of their no so common teammates)
-->ultimate team
-->dark light warriors
-->gray warriors/knights
-->dragon slayers (sounds a little familiar XD)
-->fellows team
-->mortals/deathlings (since they are all the same in this way... at some point)

(hope my naming sense is helpful....though i doubt it XD..sorry for the bad english)

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