Oh, I felt that Ren's justification was quite in-character, and a lovely fanfic at that. One of the things I'd be wary of is switching from past to present tense (I tend to do that often) and that only occured once or twice.
I've also read some of your other fanfics and liked them very much. If you don't mind, I've friended you. ^_^
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I've also read some of your other fanfics and liked them very much. If you don't mind, I've friended you. ^_^