I added you too. XD; I haven't been getting any LJ notifications today, so I didn't know when you added me, but I saw that you did when I clicked on your username.

I think your translations are more or less correct, but you might need some editing for grammar. If you'd like, I can help you edit before you post translations. :3 Have you used writely.com before? We can share documents that way! My email for that is lucathia[at]gmail.com.

By the way, I also speak Chinese. :)